Tea House 3
Sunday, April 10th, 2011 | Posted in Clan Lord, Jimsan by Jimsan
I’d say it’s getting very close to completion. At this point I’d like to ask for critique from anyone who might have an idea on how to improve it.
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2 Comments to Tea House 3
As I said in the earlier draft, I think the shape of everything looks good— the plants, the water, and the teahouse.
However, the weakness here (and generally, with your digitized work) is the texture and depth. It’s probably your next step, but it needs shadows (or in the case of the water, it needs a better texture). Right now both the teahouse and the water just look “filled in.”
JimsanApril 10, 2011
I appreciate the advice!
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April 10, 2011